Already this is a much better submission than Black Swan (whose rules still do not answer a lot of the questions that I posted, and ended up giving me headaches, hence my lack of a reply thus far).
There is a typo, and a couple points that need clarifying.
All chess rulles apply, except for the promotion rules.
Here "rulles" is misspelled.
If a King crosses into enemy territory it will get "dictatorial powers", meaning that the King will be allowed to move and capture twice in a row, provided it is not in check.
This can be put before the line explaining the border between friendly and enemy territory. I think it flows better that way.
There's also a few points that need clarifying here:
Is the second step optional? (I assume it is from the current wording)
Can the two steps be made as a jump?
Can the second step return to its starting square, even when this would skip a turn?
If it can skip a turn, are there any additional rules about turn skipping that we should be aware of?
Also, since there are Pawns starting one row back from the full row of Pawns, I must ask about the initial double step:
If one of these Pawns lands on the starting square of another Pawn, can it still make a double step?
Already this is a much better submission than Black Swan (whose rules still do not answer a lot of the questions that I posted, and ended up giving me headaches, hence my lack of a reply thus far).
There is a typo, and a couple points that need clarifying.
Here "rulles" is misspelled.
This can be put before the line explaining the border between friendly and enemy territory. I think it flows better that way.
There's also a few points that need clarifying here:
Also, since there are Pawns starting one row back from the full row of Pawns, I must ask about the initial double step: